Calling you again, for the umpteenth time
I wish you'd answer and relieve me.
Each time you have turned your back
I stand there waiting so you'd turn around.
Never did I lose hope that you will be gone
But you do try the hardest to prove me wrong.
I call and I call only for you to ignore
I shan't give up yet for I still believe-
In you and me and us together forever
In my love and yours and ours however-
You go away far again, I chase and I run
I do everything but I don't quit.
Written on Quitting for Sunday Scribblings.
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hmmmm...thts way to go gal.. Hope is wt we live on..im so sure things wil get settled and be just ur way as soon as ever and u wont run for too long :)
Take cre hun
yeah exctly
way to go!!
love,
Aayushi
Sometimes it is better to let go..
ghost of words jumping haphazardly
you know dear, i too believe sometimes it is better to let go and quit, but then you never know when you should give up and when to struggle for your happiness... complicated...
wonderful lines :)
as always!
It's interesting that this is not about quitting; it's about NOT quitting. I think it says something very positive about your character that you persist in endeavors. I hope you can distinguish those things that are worthy of dogged pursuit from those where quitting would be more appropriate.
Wow! I sound like a Granny, don't I?
sounds tiring to me. I mean.... the one you aer running to ih turning back aroud...
ignorance is pain.
thats a good one... simple and swweeeet..
some things are better alone.. but we tend to hold on.. dont we?
the bittersweet feeling of not wanting to let go, and yet, wanting just that...
"In you and me and us together forever
In my love and yours and ours however"
lovely words... but sometimes it really doesnt make sense to hang on to something that probably wasnt there... which is not to say you give in at the first sign of trouble... you do work hard... and never quit at working hard...
yeh babeeee :) neva settle sweetehart.. keep goin at it!!
but wen ya feel it's not worh runnin ne more, run in another direction!:)
loved the couplet lines :)
ps:
ya're blogrolled.
I loved it!
If something/someone is worth fighting for.. then one must go ahead I suppose
nice and sweet..
loved it... it is pretty sad... but smethngs you need to hold on...but yu shud knw wen to let go also :)
ohh..akki darls...everything is just lovely... the new look...the new name..the POEM...lovely..lovely..lovely poem..way 2 go..!
but i liked d name "painting llife yellow" more..
lv u..tc
:) :) :)
*HUGZ*
Keshi.
And agaaaiinn you wrote ME!
I see, I see!!
nice poem..
u write good
Well, Im ashamed to say this but I really do quit if I dont like doing it!
gah!
-I
As everyone says...I loved it :P
Check out my first post.
Something *specially for yu* is up there ;)
That's the spirit gal!Way to go :)
very very cool :)'
straight from the heart...
one thappad to that who evades calls......
lovely words...you have crafted the expressions so beautifully & so realistic...somethings are so different and shouldn't be quit irrespective of anything for their feelings can never go away!
Excellent post, Akila, very nice!
Happy day
hmmm..glad to hear ur perserverent...hopefully things will work out fine!
all the best
if i ever had to write about those innumerable moments when i felt exactly like that...i swear these will be my words...couldn't be better
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